We have been learning to add hooks into our writing to make our stories interesting. We can use a hook to start our paragraphs which hooks in our reader.
Great use of hooks in your writing Nakita. You do look so excited to get your chromebook. It is fantastic to see how you have used the hook work we did to add detail and hook the reader in for your recount. Great sequencing of ideas, and conclusion as well, remember to include an introduction too.
I can't wait to see all the amazing things you will do with your chromebook to help with your learning.
Great use of hooks in your writing Nakita. You do look so excited to get your chromebook. It is fantastic to see how you have used the hook work we did to add detail and hook the reader in for your recount. Great sequencing of ideas, and conclusion as well, remember to include an introduction too.
ReplyDeleteI can't wait to see all the amazing things you will do with your chromebook to help with your learning.
Mrs Gardiner (AKA - Mum)