Catching the sun

We have been learning about narrative writing. We rewrote a story called Catching the Sun. 

 beginning

At some cold and terrible dark place of the world, lived Deer, Fox, Magpie and Saynday in the cold and dark. They were as angry as goblins because there was no warmth or bright light.  Saynday has a brilliant idea, “can you all sprint really fast?”  Yes they all yelled like a herd of elephants. Quietly, Saynday whispered the whole plan. 

Middle

The fluffy fox dashed to the bright side of the world. He stayed there until the sunny sun people trusted him. The sunny sun people taught him how to play their fun games with the sun. Finally the time had come, the brown Fox grabbed the shiny sun  and zoomed until he couldn't run any more.

END

Fox passed the sun  anxiously to Deer. Deer ran and ran like an antelope. Deer zoomed and zoomed until he couldn't run any more. The mad, sunny, sun people were way behind. The Deer trotted to the feathery Magpie. Magpie flew like an eagle. Magpie passed the bright, glowing sun to Saynday. Saynday put it in the sky. One day they were too hot, so Saynday chucked the sun so high that there was light on both sides of the world.